The deadly boss of New York was nice all day.
But at night he was a gangster.
One night he robbed the bank killing only the bank owner.
In the morning the police came around to the bank.
They noticed shoe prints; the left one had nails in it. They followed the shoe prints into the desert.
They went back home for the night because there was a huge wind that wiped the police around.
The next day the police asked a servant of the boss of New York if he nailed nails into someone's boot. "Yes, I nailed nails into the left boot of the boss of New York."
The next morning the police arrested the boss of New York and put him in jail.
Then another crime started: THE CRIME OF THE MISSING BOOK OF ANSWERS.
author: Sam, age 9
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Cynthia's comments:
Nice first sentence. It is an interesting companion to the second one. Good illusion of clues. Congratulations! You have gained 3rd place in the 2007 Detective/Crime Writing Competition, aNoosa Young Writers school holiday activity at Noosa Library.
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