Thursday, July 02, 2009
Next stage - the editing process
Our group of five young writers have done a first draft each. We read one example of a story about a King Parrot who became a young boy's cherished pet after being rescued by the RSPCA. After some editing, we hope to be able to publish the stories here, or in the anthology our group plans to print this year. The Noosa Young Writers' Group meets after school on Thursdays at Noosa Library. Give us a call if you are interested in joining us. Or send an email to wllcpark@yahoo.com.au
Wednesday, July 01, 2009
Wildlife Rescue - writers' workshop
Using books available, and from our own experience, our group has chosen an Australian animal that lives in our area. Koalas, Echidna, Firefly, and King Parrot. Our stories will revolve around an environmental challenge, such as fire, clood, feral animals, or other. Watch for our exciting stories about how our wildlife can be helped to survive.
Sunday, February 03, 2008
The Stolen Book
One very dark Wednesday night at around 7:16pm, a book from the Noosa Library was stolen from a locked cabinet. The next morning all the librarians were shocked to find one of their most valuable books missing. A team of professional detectives were called in to help them find the culprit. The return of "The Book of Answers" was of the highest priority. They were briefed about the crime, where the book was located before it was taken, who had access, and that inside the cabinet three gloves were found. Was this a vital clue?
The detectives split into four groups. One went off to do the interviews, one to investigate footprints left at the scene, another team went searching for clues and evidence left behind. The last group was working on fingerprints and suspect profiles.
The Fingerprint Team analysed the cabinet to find fingerprints or DNA. A fingerprint was located on the key lock. As they compared the fingerprint to the suspects, they realised that there were five distinct features. A small dot on the bottom right corner, a black circle in the middle of the finger, three dots in the shape of a triangle at the top right of the finger, nine black lines to the left of the finger and a cluster of lines above the three triangle shaped dots. This helped in deducting that the fingerprint was no other than Suzanne's. They didn't know for sure that Suzanne had "The Book of Answers", but they now had a lead. The fingerprint detectives moved onto their second job, gathering personal information. Questions that they asked were: "What's your favourite book? How old are you? Where do you work in the library? And how many years have you been working at the library?"
Jill's favourite book was "The Power of One"; she works in technical services, is 41 years old and has been working in the library for 18 years. Michael's favourite book was Harry Potter; he is 18 years of age, works at the shelving out back and has been a trainee for 1 year. Suzanne was harder to find, but when they found her they wasted no time getting answers. She is 42 years old, works anywhere around the library; Harry Potter is her favourite book and she has worked in the library for 22 years. Steve easily gave his personal details away. He is 50 years old, works at the circulation desk and the back room. His favourite book is James and the Giant Peach, and he has worked at the library for 1 1/2 years. The Fingerprint Team had completed the tasks that they were assigned.
The Footprint Team got to work outside the emergency exit which was found ajar that morning. As they analysed a footprint they had found, they came to the conclusion that it was made by a size 9 foot, but it did not match any shoe that the suspects were currently wearing. The footprint team came to the conclusion that the suspect changed shoes.
The Clue Team found a crumpled note that was on the floor in front of the cabinet. The words did not make sense and were all jumbled except for the initials HP and DH. They quickly typed in the initials on the computer. The name Harry Potter and the Deathly Hallows appeared on the computer. And guess whose favourite book is Harry Potter? Once again Suzanne's name appeared.
Last there was the Interview Team that went to interview the suspects. They tried to get as much information out as they could but some of the suspects were not very cooperative. They found out that Michael was suspicious of Suzanne and Jill was suspicious of Steve. Suzanne and Steve were the only ones who had accessed the collection in the past week. Also they found that when they spoke to Suzanne that she did not give information away freely.
When all four groups finished their assigned tasks they discussed who they thought may have stolen "The Book of Answers". It was not that easy to remember everything that they had figured out so they each got a Suspect Matrix to collate the information. They wrote down the suspects name, where they were working, who is suspicious of them, who had access to the special collection, who looked at "The Book of Answers" and what their favourite book was.
They thought that if they went through each suspect they would figure out the crime. Michael had access to the key but that was all. Jill had access to the key but was not allowed to go into the cabinet. Steve was the same as Michael, he had access to the key but no other evidence pointed to him. Suzanne had the fingerprint match, link to the book and access to the key.
It was time to bust this crime. The detectives called in the suspects to reveal their suspicions. Jill and Steve were sent back to work as they were the least likely of the suspects. It was down to Michael and Suzanne. Detective M.J. stood up and accused Suzanne of taking the book. Suzanne was shocked, but admitted to taking the book and went to return it to its place. When she returned she explained that she wanted to ask the book something about unicorns.
The case was closed and the culprit had been caught.
Author: Alicia, aged 10
The detectives split into four groups. One went off to do the interviews, one to investigate footprints left at the scene, another team went searching for clues and evidence left behind. The last group was working on fingerprints and suspect profiles.
The Fingerprint Team analysed the cabinet to find fingerprints or DNA. A fingerprint was located on the key lock. As they compared the fingerprint to the suspects, they realised that there were five distinct features. A small dot on the bottom right corner, a black circle in the middle of the finger, three dots in the shape of a triangle at the top right of the finger, nine black lines to the left of the finger and a cluster of lines above the three triangle shaped dots. This helped in deducting that the fingerprint was no other than Suzanne's. They didn't know for sure that Suzanne had "The Book of Answers", but they now had a lead. The fingerprint detectives moved onto their second job, gathering personal information. Questions that they asked were: "What's your favourite book? How old are you? Where do you work in the library? And how many years have you been working at the library?"
Jill's favourite book was "The Power of One"; she works in technical services, is 41 years old and has been working in the library for 18 years. Michael's favourite book was Harry Potter; he is 18 years of age, works at the shelving out back and has been a trainee for 1 year. Suzanne was harder to find, but when they found her they wasted no time getting answers. She is 42 years old, works anywhere around the library; Harry Potter is her favourite book and she has worked in the library for 22 years. Steve easily gave his personal details away. He is 50 years old, works at the circulation desk and the back room. His favourite book is James and the Giant Peach, and he has worked at the library for 1 1/2 years. The Fingerprint Team had completed the tasks that they were assigned.
The Footprint Team got to work outside the emergency exit which was found ajar that morning. As they analysed a footprint they had found, they came to the conclusion that it was made by a size 9 foot, but it did not match any shoe that the suspects were currently wearing. The footprint team came to the conclusion that the suspect changed shoes.
The Clue Team found a crumpled note that was on the floor in front of the cabinet. The words did not make sense and were all jumbled except for the initials HP and DH. They quickly typed in the initials on the computer. The name Harry Potter and the Deathly Hallows appeared on the computer. And guess whose favourite book is Harry Potter? Once again Suzanne's name appeared.
Last there was the Interview Team that went to interview the suspects. They tried to get as much information out as they could but some of the suspects were not very cooperative. They found out that Michael was suspicious of Suzanne and Jill was suspicious of Steve. Suzanne and Steve were the only ones who had accessed the collection in the past week. Also they found that when they spoke to Suzanne that she did not give information away freely.
When all four groups finished their assigned tasks they discussed who they thought may have stolen "The Book of Answers". It was not that easy to remember everything that they had figured out so they each got a Suspect Matrix to collate the information. They wrote down the suspects name, where they were working, who is suspicious of them, who had access to the special collection, who looked at "The Book of Answers" and what their favourite book was.
They thought that if they went through each suspect they would figure out the crime. Michael had access to the key but that was all. Jill had access to the key but was not allowed to go into the cabinet. Steve was the same as Michael, he had access to the key but no other evidence pointed to him. Suzanne had the fingerprint match, link to the book and access to the key.
It was time to bust this crime. The detectives called in the suspects to reveal their suspicions. Jill and Steve were sent back to work as they were the least likely of the suspects. It was down to Michael and Suzanne. Detective M.J. stood up and accused Suzanne of taking the book. Suzanne was shocked, but admitted to taking the book and went to return it to its place. When she returned she explained that she wanted to ask the book something about unicorns.
The case was closed and the culprit had been caught.
Author: Alicia, aged 10
Friday, February 01, 2008
The case of the Missing Golden Pearl
Once there was a golden pearl. It was worth $999,999,000. So it was kept in high security safe because of it's value. Many thieves tried to steel it but none of them were successful. Until today, there was a thief that was never caught because of he was the king of thieves. He had nearly been caught when he was steeling the golden pearl.
There was a team of detectives who had been looking for the king of thieves for 21 years. There names were Liam, Michael and Sam. First they checked to see if it was the king of thieves. It was. So they set off to find him. As they walked out the door they saw foot prints leading to the forest that was the the side of the building. So they headed off to the forest. But they found it lead to 2 tracks. So they checked what the king of thieves sole of his shoe looked like. It looked like the marks on the left track. So they went to the left track.
There at the end of the track there was a secret house right in the middle of the forest. It was small but one man didn't need a big house. So they went in the house and all they found was finger prints. Michael found a map with a dot on it that was at Noosa Bushlands. So Michael told the others and they set off to Noosa Bushlands to find the king of thieves. Liam saw something moving in the bushes so they checked but it was only a koala. They set off to the deepest part of the forest and there he was, but he had a gun, so Sam sneaked behind him and tripped him and grabbed his gun and called the police. The King of Thieves had finally been caught.
author: Michael, aged 9
There was a team of detectives who had been looking for the king of thieves for 21 years. There names were Liam, Michael and Sam. First they checked to see if it was the king of thieves. It was. So they set off to find him. As they walked out the door they saw foot prints leading to the forest that was the the side of the building. So they headed off to the forest. But they found it lead to 2 tracks. So they checked what the king of thieves sole of his shoe looked like. It looked like the marks on the left track. So they went to the left track.
There at the end of the track there was a secret house right in the middle of the forest. It was small but one man didn't need a big house. So they went in the house and all they found was finger prints. Michael found a map with a dot on it that was at Noosa Bushlands. So Michael told the others and they set off to Noosa Bushlands to find the king of thieves. Liam saw something moving in the bushes so they checked but it was only a koala. They set off to the deepest part of the forest and there he was, but he had a gun, so Sam sneaked behind him and tripped him and grabbed his gun and called the police. The King of Thieves had finally been caught.
author: Michael, aged 9
The Deadly Crime
The deadly boss of New York was nice all day.
But at night he was a gangster.
One night he robbed the bank killing only the bank owner.
In the morning the police came around to the bank.
They noticed shoe prints; the left one had nails in it. They followed the shoe prints into the desert.
They went back home for the night because there was a huge wind that wiped the police around.
The next day the police asked a servant of the boss of New York if he nailed nails into someone's boot. "Yes, I nailed nails into the left boot of the boss of New York."
The next morning the police arrested the boss of New York and put him in jail.
Then another crime started: THE CRIME OF THE MISSING BOOK OF ANSWERS.
author: Sam, age 9
But at night he was a gangster.
One night he robbed the bank killing only the bank owner.
In the morning the police came around to the bank.
They noticed shoe prints; the left one had nails in it. They followed the shoe prints into the desert.
They went back home for the night because there was a huge wind that wiped the police around.
The next day the police asked a servant of the boss of New York if he nailed nails into someone's boot. "Yes, I nailed nails into the left boot of the boss of New York."
The next morning the police arrested the boss of New York and put him in jail.
Then another crime started: THE CRIME OF THE MISSING BOOK OF ANSWERS.
author: Sam, age 9
Thursday, January 10, 2008
Three Mysteries
From our earlier school holiday mystery writing workshops, three stories emerged as winners. The authors have given their consent to have their stories published on this blog. They are currently enjoying their book prizes.
In 3rd place, The Deadly Crime; 2nd was The case of the missing Golden Pearl; and 1st place goes to The Stolen Book.
In 3rd place, The Deadly Crime; 2nd was The case of the missing Golden Pearl; and 1st place goes to The Stolen Book.
Friday, December 14, 2007
Competition winners
It has taken us a long time, but we have finally chosen the two winners of the story competition from the last writers' workshop. Congratulations to Alicia for your story "The Stolen Book", and to Michael who is runner up. Any day now, when the monkeys wake up and get back to work, we will post your stories for everyone to read. Your book prizes are waiting for you to collect.
Wednesday, September 26, 2007
Crime Busters workshop
We have just had the most fantastic crime solving workshop at the library. Twenty young detectives in four teams worked together to solve the most heinous crime in the library - the theft of the Great Book of All Answers from the locked cabinet of precious items. Following clues, checking fingerprints and footprints, and interviewing suspects, the group managed to crack the crime and apprehend the criminal. Now, the task is to write a story (in 500 words or fewer) based on the workshop experience. The best will be published here, and one winner will receive a book prize. Thank you to library staff, and especially to Cynthia Rohner, for making this workshop such a success.
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